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2. You received a letter from a friend who asked for a recommendation letter from you for the job that he/she is applying for. Write a letter to the manager: – Explain how well you know this person – Describe how this person work – Why you think this person is suitable for the job.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to recommend Miss
Jessy
 Chen who is a candidate for a position of
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relationship manager at ABC
company
. I believe that she is the most suitable person for
this
 job. I have been working closely with Miss
Jessy
 for 10 years. She is
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 person who can solve difficult problems and always dedicates herself to a team. Her working style is impressive.
Last
 year, our team
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 with
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many challenges, but she performed very well in many aspects.
For example
, she was handling multiple tasks as well as resolving conflicts between our
company
 and clients in
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 manner. On top of that, all colleagues enjoy working with her ,since she brings us positive attitudes and
enery
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energy
 to a team. As I mentioned above, I firmly believe that Miss
Jessy
 is
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 suitable candidate for working as a relationship manager. She will definitely perform a positive mindset to your organization. Particularly, her
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 experience will give your
company
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ample
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benefits.
Therefore
, I highly recommend Miss
Jessy
 to ABC
company
. Sincerely, Jenny Lee
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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