More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions?

The large population of

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in ongoing countries are buying cars for the

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time owing to low salaries and job shortages in these districts. The main problem

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causes is that they cannot afford the

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so The most viable solutions are raising Salaries and creating job by the government. Lack of

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major issues that can result in peoples purchasing power is declining. In

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they prefer to provide essential items

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as foodstuffs and clothes. They

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save money to pay the rent of their houses. When they have these problems cars travel and entertainment become insignificant to them.

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few

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think about buying a

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and only a small percentage of them can do it,

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Their earnings did not cover their expenses.

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according to statistics in 2004 In India 22 out of every 1000

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had a

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, That was awful. Job creation by

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could shed some light on

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problem.

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is a proven solution. New jobs can be created by

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in two ways.

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setting up new factories and hiring staff to work,

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encourage

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a loan To register private companies and engage their fellow-citizens. 1000 to 3000 workforces can be recruited per each company.

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is a two-pronged deal and would be incredible. If these ideas are implemented in developing countries

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can pay more attention to the secondary needs of their lives

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they will buy

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a car

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method enabled

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to buy their

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jobs, respectably

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could have welfare and more cars bound to buy.