More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions?
The large population of
people
in ongoing countries are buying cars for the first
time owing to low salaries and job shortages in these districts. The main problem this
causes is that they cannot afford the car
so The most viable solutions are raising Salaries and creating job by the government.
Lack of joband
low income Correct your spelling
job and
jobs and
our
major issues that can result in peoples purchasing power is declining. In Correct your spelling
are
this
situation
they prefer to provide essential items Add a comma
,situation
such
as foodstuffs and clothes. They also
save money to pay the rent of their houses. When they have these problems cars travel and entertainment become insignificant to them. Consequently
few people
think about buying a car
and only a small percentage of them can do it, hence
Their earnings did not cover their expenses. For
example
according to statistics in 2004 In India 22 out of every 1000 Add a comma
,example
people
had a car
, That was awful.
Job creation by government
could shed some light on Add an article
the government
this
problem. This
is a proven solution. New jobs can be created by government
in two ways. Add an article
the government
Firstly
setting up new factories and hiring staff to work, Secondly
encourage people
by give
a loan To register private companies and engage their fellow-citizens. 1000 to 3000 workforces can be recruited per each company. Change the verb form
giving
This
is a two-pronged deal and would be incredible. If these ideas are implemented in developing countries people
can pay more attention to the secondary needs of their lives therefore
they will buy Add an article
a car
the car
car
Fix the agreement mistake
cars
for instance
China by using this
method enabled people
to buy their first
car
.
In conclusion
if Add a comma
,conclusion
administration
Correct article usage
the administration
create
jobs, respectably Change the verb form
creates
people
could have welfare and more cars bound to buy.Submitted by TUTOO on
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