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The Pictures below show three different kinds of bridges. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given map illustrates three styles of bridges that are usually constructed
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Arch
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, concrete and suspension
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bridge
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bridges
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, and their features of environment, vessels, and sizes.
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, among these three types of bridges, the
Arch
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bridge
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 is the simplest and shortest,
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 the concrete Girder
bridge
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 is often constructed across rivers, and the suspension cable
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, which is much more complicated, is suitable for building across the sea so that large ships are capable of cruising under it. Regarding the
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bridge
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, the construction of
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 one is fairly simple and short because it is usually built across lakes only.
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, it is often built of bricks, and its
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 is normally around 100
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, which is suitable for small boats to move under it easily. The concrete girder
bridge
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 is slightly more complicated compared with an
Arch
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bridge
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, usually constructed across a river.
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, it is longer with a span of 200
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 and can be extended unlimitedly. The
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 of
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 type of
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 is often about 300
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, which is triple
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3 times
 longer compared to that of an
Arch
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bridge
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, and
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height
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 is good enough for medium-sized ships to go under it without any problems. In terms of the suspension cable
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,
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 construction is much bigger and longer compared with the two above ones.
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, the distance between the two piers is often about 400 to 2000
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. The
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 from the sea water to the
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 is often much higher than that of a concrete girder
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 so that it enables large ships to navigate easily.

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Enhance the introduction by explicitly stating the purpose of the map and summarizing the main features succinctly.
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Ensure each paragraph flows into the next with more linking phrases to strengthen coherence between points.
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Provide clearer distinctions between the bridge types, particularly with their specific uses and features to enhance comparisons.
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Good use of specific dimensions and descriptions for the bridges, which adds detail to your response.
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You have a clear outline of each bridge type, making it easy for the reader to follow your descriptions.

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