Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Do you think it is positive or negative development?

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decade, replacing of small shopping malls is one of the most important problems associated with big

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. Personally, I strongly believe that

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situation will lead to

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positive consequences. In the

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paragraph, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in detail with

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prominent examples.

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of all, people get more choice of

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at the huge supermarkets. There are various options

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the goods compared to the local

shops

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, fruits, vegetables, craft

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, and dairy

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to name but a few. Since the large department stores have a bigger space to show the

products

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The customers have more options to buy.

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, Abilities to select diverse stuff into the marketplaces

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also

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considered as one of the main reasons

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a different choice to sell as well.

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, big supermarkets provide

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excellent customer service. Not only to provide a selected product, but they

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offer buyers a

high quality

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service. The large malls are likely to present customers

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best experiences when they are in the

shops

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, all the employees are trained to serve quality services to clients. They prepare to answer and help buyers find some stuff.

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, the section of

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is located near the entrance to let visitors ask for help if they needed. Guarantees and return policies can be found in some shopping malls. These are

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benefit

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of having big

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in town. To sum up, becoming

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large marketplace instate of the small one is a positive movement. Since they provide multiple choices of selling and

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a service-mind in their space as well.