In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In the past
books
were considered the best source of knowledge
. But nowadays in the technology era, people tend to use the Internet
to research knowledge
. It has negative and positive effects. In my opinion, we have many more advantages than disadvantages
One of the major advantages of the internet
is that we can find knowledge
cheaper and save time. For instance
, in education, many students can find study materials about specific topics to study different from books
. If we had projects, maybe we would go to the library all day to find the main source. On the internet
, we have abundant websites to access no limit
Add a hyphen
no-limit
knowledge
for relevant information
. For example
, we can find how to cook cupcakes on the Internet
and they have a variety of information
.
But there are several disadvantages, on the internet
has much information
. Maybe we do not know what is the best information
. For example
, some terrorists can be hidden hackers to damage information
at risk lost personal information
compared to books
that have been written by an author or expert and it brings more reliable information
than on the internet
. Next,
we used books
which consumed a lot of money. Therefore
, most people likely seeking information
on the Internet
also
obtain knowledge
because it is available and cheaper or even free
To sum up
in my view, in the digital era most people prefer looking for information
quickly on the internet
than books
. As a result
, we have more benefits than drawbacks.Submitted by jakedth162 on
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