Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your email -describe where you lived when you were a student at the university -recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation -warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation
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Dear friend,
First
of all, I am really glad that you found the best place for you to advance your studies. I would be more than happy to share my own experiences of living there, with you.
When I was enrolling as a student I used to live in a school dormitory. Firstly
, it was the cheapest option, thus
the pay will not be great pressure on your back. Secondly
, it was safest to live there. Most students who are from Mongolia lived there, but the other international students were more eager to live outside of the school campus, not only because they prefered different scenes other than the school atmosphere, but also
they wanted to avoid campus rules.
If you want to choose the latter option, I would like to recommend you about
the website named "www.findyourbestplace.cn". It has a variety of options on both flats and houses. You can book the accommodation on the website itself, so it is more reliable and the information posted is useful.
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Lastly
, I want to remind you to give attention to the heating system of the flat while you're choosing it. Because it is so cold during the winter, and most of the heating systems in houses were designed only by an air conditioner. In order to be more comfortable, please give extra attention to the heater.
I hope you will find a
great pleasure there. If you have any other questions, feel free to write and ask me.
Love,
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Zulaa
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,