There is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What are the causes and solutions?

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Nowadays, disrespect and other kinds of anti-social behaviours become more trending than before. While there are some reasons for
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issue, it can be addressed by some solutions. The
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which are against social rules are happened because of unstable upbringing and globalization.
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, these days parents experience
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lifestyle, and
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leads them to more work hours.
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remains
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less quality time for nurturing and being with their children, so children in
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families
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usually learn less social skills.
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, the communication between countries grows
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for them,
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a culture or
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which is common in a country
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may consider as
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anti-social in another one.
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, dancing or singing by women is a normal act in most countries, but in some
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countries,
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as Iran it is against social behaving
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and even a crime. There are some actions which can be done to tackle the above.
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, children should be educated. Families should spend more time together, and
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helps parents recognize bad
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early age.
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step, the governments should revise the laws and culture, and change the ones obsoleted for
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world.
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decline the figures by omitting
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actions that are not really offensive to
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of society. In conclusion,
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the growing trend can be seen in bad social
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,
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issue can be easily addressed by some actions
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