In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Unequivocally true that a huge number of

people

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around the world suffer from hunger even though

agriculture

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the agriculture

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sector has experienced

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technological developments.There are several reasonable reasons for

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huge problem.

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, economic disparity and adverse weather conditions are the most important among them.By the way,there are some ways which can be implemented to tackle

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problem.

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of all,one of the significant proofs for why

people

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do not have adequate food supplies is class differences among society.To cue evidence,it is known that most

people

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who travail from starvation are from undeveloped countries like:Iraq, Palestine, Yemen and etc where they have no financial supports.There are many solutions to overcome

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trend.For sure developed countries can help poor communities by sharing their financial resources. Climate change can

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aggravate

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huge issue

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people

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all around the world involve with it.

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,some countries in Africa have

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harvest of crops but

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all of them

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by flooding or other natural disasters which

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caused by climate.

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, scientists can invent some plants or super speeds which can stand against undesirable natural conditions.So,we can say they are still some ways that can stop these awful events. In conclusion,it is absolutely true that a significant number of

people

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in today's world suffer from famine even though we have many advances in agriculture.But in my opinion,we can overcome

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problem by providing financial aids,and knowledge to protect our planet.

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,if we do not care,it will

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effect

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the whole planet in a miserable way.

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Topic Vocabulary:

inequality
distribution
access to resources
climate change
natural disasters
political factors
economic factors
agricultural practices
infrastructure
transportation
population growth
education
knowledge
food waste

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