Some people think that government should provide free education at every level however some say that individuals should have to pay for their University education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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government

provide free

education

at every level and

on the other hand

some people criticized

this

fact .

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focus

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on two different types of

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of

this

aspect . I preferred that

government

should have to make planning the way they have to improve the

education

structure in our country so that n Every individual

have

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equal right

of

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education

and job facilities to every individual like foreign countries Canada and others . In

this

way

burden

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of parents reduces on

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shoulder

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of their children and every individual has

chance

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a chance

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to get

education

rights to reduce unemployment, poverty, democracy,

theifts

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thefts

,politics.

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one side ,

this

is the prime responsibility of

government

to take charge to provide a free cost of

education

to each and every level of individual of

society

without partiality for secondary level

education

.So that every individual will become more educated and they will get their jobs accomplished with their

education

On the other side ,

government

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should have to take initiative to provide

part time

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jobs for those individuals who

has

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a chance to take admission to university so that they can pay their fees

by

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on

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their

owns

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and it should automatically reduce the burden of parents and

also

take a good step for the improvement of

society

,

welfare

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the welfare

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of

society

. in

this

way

every one

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to give equal chance for

education

In conclusion ,

government

sould

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should

would

have to take

hard

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a hard

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step for improvement of

country

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the country

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for improvement of

society

.