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Children are facing more pressures nowadays academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of the pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce the pressures?

#children #pressures #perspectives #measures
These days, it is apparent that
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academic stress among children has dramatically increased. In
this
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this
pressure
 occurs will be discussed in detail, and the promising remedies will be addressed to alleviate the problems. The
first
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 to higher pressures is
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 high expectation from
parents
. As every
parents
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 wants their pupils to be
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successful
person
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people
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, they inadvertently
pressure
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child
childs
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children
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 by sending them to study extra classes
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 and convince their
offsprings
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offspring
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 to study in the field of higher education as they want.
For example
, some
parents
 want their kids to be a doctor without asking the kid's
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intentions
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. As the result,
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children
childrens
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children
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 become anxious and depressed.
Moreover
, the recent
class
 contains too
much
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 of
cirriculums
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curriculums
curriculum
 per
day
.
For example
, In Thailand,
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high school's
students
 need to study in
class
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 8 hours per
day
, which
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amount of time is higher than most schools in the world.
Therefore
,
students
 can be stressed from prolonged classes. In order to mitigate the
afforementioned
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aforementioned
 problems,
parents
 should give pupils the freedom in
favor
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 of selecting their own future life. Obviously, they will be good at their favourite subjects, and they can use the
knowledges
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knowledge
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 to generate income in the future with a strong passion.
For instance
, my parent respected my decision to select the faculty for the university.
Consequently
, I love the jobs that I'm doing right now as an agricultural extensionist.
Furthermore
, the authority should reduce the duration
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 the
class
 per
day
 to optimize the learning performance. According to the BBC news report,
although
 the
students
 in
europe
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Europe
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 spend only 5 hours in schools, they are more
genious
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generous
 and be able to work in
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prestigious companies compared to Thai
students
.
Hence
,
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more time
spending
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 in
class
 does not
guaruntee
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guarantee
 the capability of
students
. In conclusion, the number of
students
 who are suffering from
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academic
stresses
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stress
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 has more and more increased
everyday
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 due to the
pressure
 from their
parents
 and
long
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the long
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class
 duration.
However
,
these
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pressure
 can be minimized by providing
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freedom to kids and
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reducing
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 the
class
 session per
day
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic pressure
  • globalized world
  • competitive education system
  • social media influences
  • cyberbullying
  • commercial pressures
  • aggressive marketing
  • materialistic desires
  • peer pressure
  • high expectations
  • standardized testing
  • quantifiable performance
  • stress and anxiety
  • extracurricular achievements
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