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Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

#diet #meat #health
Some people are vegetarian and others are not. Is it necessary to adopt a vegetarian
diet
 to be a healthy person?. Our
health
 is related to eating
meat
 or
vegetables
, whereas some people say that if we want to be a healthy person, equally we have to eat
vegetables
 and fruits during our daily activities.
To begin
 with, I disagree with
this
 theory which says; everyone should adopt a vegetarian
diet
 because eating
meat
 can cause serious
health
 problems
,
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 because I think our
health
 relate to our activities and exercise during the day.
For example
, if we just eat
vegetables
 and do not exercise during our life,
finally
 our body will weaken.
In addition
, our
diet
 should have different types of
nutritions
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.
For instance
, we have to eat nuts and proteins, and vitamins in our dairy. If we remove
meat
 and other
nutritions
, our body will be weak,
Therefore
, the
health
 problem due to majority problems
such
 as our
diet
, and our activities.
Furthermore
, some food experts and scientists have ideas about human's
health
 stem from some experimental data and empirical evidence.
For example
, they think our
health
 problems arise from past bad habits, and if we want to change them we should append some new
nutritions
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such
 as
vegetables
 to our daily meals. To conclude
this
 essay, everyone might adopt a vegetarian
diet
 for himself or herself, but eating
meat
 is necessary for our body.
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