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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #person’s #culture #character #choice #clothes
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There is a view that a person’s culture and personality can be recognized from the attire they choose to wear. In my opinion,
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 might tell few details about
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, I totally disagree with
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 statement.
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 with, it is important to acknowledge that the phenomenon of globalization has affected many
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 around the world in their clothing selection.
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 is because there are now international clothing brands that are shipped all over the world.
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, in my country, the sporting
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 brand Nike sells the same products that are in stores in the United States.
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, despite the significantly different cultural backgrounds, most
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 in both countries almost wear the same apparel and shoes.
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, I believe that
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 give little views and details about
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. The reason for
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 is that there are some
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 are required to wear a specific type of
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 due to their work requirement.
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,
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 who work in the banking sector are required to wear a formal dress code, and
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 does not mean necessarily that they are rich
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. What is more, the colours of
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 can be sometimes confusing to many
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 to determine someone’s feelings. To illustrate
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, if someone prefers to wear black-coloured
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, many
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 would think that they are sad. In conclusion, there are many factors that affect
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 selection nowadays
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 as globalization that made most
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 can wear the same
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 and
people
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 who are required to wear certain
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 due to their work conditions. In my view, I believe that it is not possible to know about
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’s personality and culture from their choice of
clothes
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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