Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a controversial idea heating a debate over the role of

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in

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or military force. While some claim that there should be a balance in the role of

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genders, the opposite makes a statement that

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are not fit in these positions.

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essay is devoted to making a discussion about

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views and indicating my opinion which agrees with the latter idea. It is reasonable why

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are discouraged from being recruited in the force of

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or military due to their lack of required physical

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. Meanwhile,

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are superior in that aspect, namely muscular

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or endurance, which are determining factors in these kinds of jobs.

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, the missions facing either petty ones

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as stealing and robbing actions or the more serious ones that involve terrorism or murders need soldiers or officers having

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and stamina to chase and arrest those criminals. Without those features, they can be endangered by their counterattack.

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,

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are less preferable than

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in those fields as

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tend to meet the

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requirement more than

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do While

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thinking is widely acknowledged, it is unwise to completely deprive

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's opportunities to

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in these kinds of jobs. Even when they do not have

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ability as

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,

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still can apply the technology achievements nowadays which is

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a factor that facilitates the

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and army if they are well-informed and trained.

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, Interpol, known as the International Criminal

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Organization has computerized several steps in the process of arresting

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as tracking and navigating criminals and ended up succeeding in various tasks. All in all, the responsibility of

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genders in

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should not be unequal and underestimated In summary,

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viewpoints have their own reasons.

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, I consider myself

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an advocate for the participation of

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in military fields.