Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a controversial idea heating a debate over the role of

women

in

police

or military force. While some claim that there should be a balance in the role of

both

genders, the opposite makes a statement that

women

are not fit in these positions.

This

essay is devoted to making a discussion about

both

views and indicating my opinion which agrees with the latter idea. It is reasonable why

women

are discouraged from being recruited in the force of

police

or military due to their lack of required physical

strength

. Meanwhile,

men

are superior in that aspect, namely muscular

strength

or endurance, which are determining factors in these kinds of jobs.

For instance

, the missions facing either petty ones

such

as stealing and robbing actions or the more serious ones that involve terrorism or murders need soldiers or officers having

strength

and stamina to chase and arrest those criminals. Without those features, they can be endangered by their counterattack.

Hence

,

women

are less preferable than

men

in those fields as

men

tend to meet the

strength

requirement more than

women

do While

this

thinking is widely acknowledged, it is unwise to completely deprive

women

's opportunities to

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in these kinds of jobs. Even when they do not have

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ability as

men

,

women

still can apply the technology achievements nowadays which is

also

a factor that facilitates the

police

and army if they are well-informed and trained.

For example

, Interpol, known as the International Criminal

Police

Organization has computerized several steps in the process of arresting

such

as tracking and navigating criminals and ended up succeeding in various tasks. All in all, the responsibility of

both

genders in

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should not be unequal and underestimated In summary,

both

viewpoints have their own reasons.

However

, I consider myself

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an advocate for the participation of

women

in military fields.