Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a controversial idea heating a debate over the role of
women
in
police
or military force. While some claim that there should be a balance in the role of
both
genders, the opposite makes a statement that
women
are not fit in these positions.
This
essay is devoted to making a discussion about
both
views and indicating my opinion which agrees with the latter idea. It is reasonable why
women
are discouraged from being recruited in the force of
police
or military due to their lack of required physical
strength
. Meanwhile,
men
are superior in that aspect, namely muscular
strength
or endurance, which are determining factors in these kinds of jobs.
For instance
, the missions facing either petty ones
such
as stealing and robbing actions or the more serious ones that involve terrorism or murders need soldiers or officers having
strength
and stamina to chase and arrest those criminals. Without those features, they can be endangered by their counterattack.
Hence
,
women
are less preferable than
men
in those fields as
men
tend to meet the
strength
requirement more than
women
do While
this
thinking is widely acknowledged, it is unwise to completely deprive
women
's opportunities to
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in these kinds of jobs. Even when they do not have
physical
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ability as
men
,
women
still can apply the technology achievements nowadays which is
also
a factor that facilitates the
police
and army if they are well-informed and trained.
For example
, Interpol, known as the International Criminal
Police
Organization has computerized several steps in the process of arresting
such
as tracking and navigating criminals and ended up succeeding in various tasks. All in all, the responsibility of
both
genders in
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should not be unequal and underestimated In summary,
both
viewpoints have their own reasons.
However
, I consider myself
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an advocate for the participation of
women
in military fields.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • equality
  • stereotypes
  • diversity
  • physical prowess
  • discrimination
  • negotiation skills
  • gender roles
  • morale
  • integrated forces
  • equal opportunities
  • unit cohesion
  • combat effectiveness
  • bias
  • harassment
  • meritocracy
  • transformative
  • empowerment
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