7.The pie charts compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

7.The pie charts compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
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The graphs illustrate the data about the
proportion
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of using
water
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from other countries namely
San
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Diego
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,
California
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, and the rest of the world. It is clear to see that in
San
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Diego
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Country and
California
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, the percentage of using
water
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from housing and industry
are
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the most, and the
proportion
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of consuming
water
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of
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for
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agriculture
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are
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the least.
In contrast
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, the rates of using
water
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the highest around the world are
agriculture
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and the lowest are
residential
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in residential
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. The percentages of consuming
water
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of
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housing in
San
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Diego
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Country and
California
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are 60% and 39%, respectively. The rates of using
water
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of
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industry and
Agriculture
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in
California
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are higher than in
San
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Diego
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Country by 10% and 11%, respectively.
In
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the
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worldwide the
proportion
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of consuming
water
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from
agriculture
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is the most at 69%,
then
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that is
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the percentage of using
water
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of
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industry is at 23%, and the least
proportion
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of consuming
water
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is residential is 8%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, water, san, diego, california, agriculture with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
  • exceptionally
  • improvements
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