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Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Superstars enjoy most of the wealthy
lifestyles
 as well as numerous issues in their personal
lives
.
This
 essay discusses the facilities
such
 as financial gain for being well-known persons;
thereafter
, it explains several issues that celeb face in their daily
lives
. To initiate with, stars earn the most financial benefits compared to the ordinary-individual professionals in real life. These financial benefits
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 achieved from the sponsorship of multinational companies and local companies to promote their products due to their reach to the local people.
In addition
, these superstars are rewarded huge amounts of cash by the state authorities via different contracts from sports authorities or films association depending on their competence.
This
 cash promotes their wealthy
lifestyles
 that people are craving . Bangladesh Cricket Superstar Shakib-Al-Ahsan,
for instance
, is awarded a contract equivalent to $10 million per year for the
next
 five years by the National Cricket Control Board, which will fuel his personal lifestyle for sure.
In contrast
, these superstars’ personal
lives
 are disturbed by the media and the supporters’ group. These fans and secret-camera men from the media follow these stars wherever they visit;
therefore
, their personal
lives
 can be awful as these well-known individuals lost their freedom of personal
lives
 in my view. In Bangladesh,
for example
, private videos of Tahsan and Mithila spread on the web, which leads to their divorce.
Consequently
, the famous people pay a price for their financial benefit and flashy
lifestyles
 by losing freedom. To conclude, celeb enjoy their wealth from sponsorships and several contracts depending on their competence and fame.
On the other hand
, their flashy
lifestyles
 attract fans and the media, who destroy their private
lives
.
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