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The map illustrates how an
island
 called Paradise has developed over the
last
 31 years(1980-2021). There have been several changes,but the most noticeable being the elimination of the researching property,the increase in urbanization,the introduction of the leisure facilities. In 1980, people were using boats as a transportation method to reach the
Island
 via the tiny pier. Significantly, individuals were not allowed to swim on the northwest side of the map where the beach was situated.
Island
 was surrounded by the sea and a few citizens who were inhabitants of the
Island
 had an interest in science which can be proved by the Scientific Research Station which was
next
 to the trees. Just beyond it, here lies Natural Spring which was quite useful for the healing and recreation agendas. On the northeast side of the
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map Rocks were placed. In 2021, the transportation method converts to cruise ships and now people have expanded roads compared to small and uncomfortable roads. The beach stays unspoilt under one new condition,swimming is allowed which is absolutely perfect for the population of the
Island
. Increasing the number of people can be observed via the growing number in the infrastructures. Scientific Research Station was demolished and replaced with the Hotel Complex and Swimming pool which is located in the north of it. Properties which are placed
next
 to the Hotel Complex intends for the citizens' relaxation,
thus
,
such
 as an Open restaurant with a BBQ area and a Cafe on the way to the east of the
island
. In order to be assistive to the tourists,now on the south side of the open restaurant cycle path is placed. Rocks stay untouched and
next
 to it scenic lookout is one of the most beautiful offers made by the
Island
.
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