These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Disscuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in foreign country. Give reason from for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We live in
this
era where mobility inter-country is something that can done easily whether to pursue education or find more opportunities
of
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for
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career
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a career
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.
While
deciding to live
aboard
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abroad is
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sometimes very exciting for
explore
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exploring
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different cultures and
embrace
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embracing
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self development
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, there are
also
drawbacks
such
as
long
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apply
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distance
relationship
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relationships
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with family or the closest ones and abdicating responsibility to build their home country. Living aboard and starting a new kind of life with
capability
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the capability
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to understand a
total
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different culture and learn to handle everything alone always seems fun to do. Finding a new place
include
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includes
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adapting
with
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a new
environtment
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environment
and
people
in it.
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to know a
brand new
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culture
is abling
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enables
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individuals to be more respectful
for
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the
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differences.
Moreover
,
this
circumstance of living in a new place
force
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forces
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people
to develop
theirseleves
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themselves
.
This
may not be comfortable at first of moving, but
this
uneasy feeling is a good sign of growth.
However
,
settle
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settling
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up in a new state
also
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not a simple task
due to
separation
with
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from
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family or
friend
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friends
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and disappointment
to
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in
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not
contribute
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contributing
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to their
nation
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expansion. Before even
start
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starting
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to reside aboard,
firstly
,
people
possibly think about their
relations
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relationships
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. Drawing an analogy to long distance relationship, several
couple
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state that it is very hard to keep.
Secondly
, the calls to build
people
's
birth of place
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birthplace
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perhaps cast down
at
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this
case.
To conclude
,
while
be
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being
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close to
another cultures
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another culture
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and
self maturing
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are
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is
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the benefit of
reside
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residing
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aboard
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abroad
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, the space with family and
home sickness
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homesickness
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also
should be considered.
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