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It is believed that women are more suited to child-rearing than men. What is your opinion on this issue?

#women #men
The Presented chart depicts the United Kingdom (UK) telephone calls, in the total number of
minutes
, which are segregated into 3 types (Local, National and International, and cell phones), differed in
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 period from 1995 to 2002. Whereas,
minutes
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 UK citizens are
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 interested in local calls when it is compared to other types. Communication through mobiles is seemed to be very low and they have been increased to a lot. On the one hand, Local calls are rapidly increased from 1995 to 1999
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 20
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • child-rearing
  • caregiver
  • social constructs
  • nurturing
  • gender roles
  • stereotypes
  • paternity leave
  • co-parenting
  • development
  • economic pressures
  • primary caregiver
  • gender biases
  • fluidity of roles
  • societal norms
  • inherent differences
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