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In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will able to read everything they want online without paying To extend do you agree or disagree with this statement

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
Some
people
 predict that there will not have
people
 purchasing both
newspapers
 and
books
 in the future since all of them are free on the internet. I partially agree with
this
 view, there will always have a group of
people
 who love reading a paper
book
 more than an e-
book
.
However
, in the case of
newspapers
, I believe that
people
 will no longer buy them, and read the
news
 on their phones
instead
. To start with, the texture between paper and electronic devices is different, many
book
 lovers love the feeling when they were touching the paper. Not only the texture but
also
 the scent from
books
 and
newspapers
 will make
people
 choose them over online
books
.
For example
, each publisher has their own unique
book
 scents that e-
book
 cannot have, so their fans will always pay for printed
books
.
On the other hand
, the major reason why I think that
people
 will only find the daily
news
 on their electric devices,
such
 as the Ipad, and mobile phones, is because of the convenience. They can read anywhere anytime, while printed
newspapers
 are difficult to read due to their sizes.
For instance
, when you want to read some
news
 in the middle of eating in the restaurant, you can just open your phone and search for them, you do not have to go to buy some
newspapers
 from the outside. In conclusion, even in the future,
people
 will still purchase a printed
book
 because of its texture, but there will not have any person who read the
news
 in
newspapers
 anymore, since they are hard to carry to other places.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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