In many countries, crimes rates amongst younger people has been rising. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem.

It could be easily seen that there is an increasing trend of the young generation's

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rates among many regions. More

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cases caused by the young might come from the lack of

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, poor laws and

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essay. One of the main causes of rising criminal proportion could come from the

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, or to be more specific, it comes from their irresponsibilities. It is well-known that the best way to raise children is to befriend them, spend time getting to know the

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better;

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,

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could provide more

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when it is needed.

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, if the young are not received enough

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, they would start to think differently, which leads to more false behaviours.

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, the lack of government's

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led to the growth of teenagers'

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. When more rules are enacted to punish the wrong behaviours, the young

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aware of those and think twice before they dare to do something illegal.

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, currently, Vietnam's laws for the under 18 are just providing them lectures, grounding them home in a period depending on their wrongdoing. These are not hard enough to prevent those

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from stealing, murdering, etc. There are many solutions that could be suggested, but the most effective one is enacting more

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to protect the harmed citizen and hardly punish the wrong one.

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of it, there would be more

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worrying about their children's futures if the

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get busted,

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, more

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is provided. Not only the

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the

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might carefully think before doing any illegal stuff and

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could help the rates of criminal decrease significantly. In conclusion, rising rates of

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could come from various factors namely

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, schools, and laws. I would suggest that the wrongdoing should be hardly punished by enacting more

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help protect the citizen more safely.