In many countries, crimes rates amongst younger people has been rising. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem.
It could be easily seen that there is an increasing trend of the young generation's
crimes
rates among many regions. More crimes
cases caused by the young might come from the lack of parents
' attention
, poor laws and policies
, etc, and I will suggest some solutions later in this
essay.
One of the main causes of rising criminal proportion could come from the parents
, or to be more specific, it comes from their irresponsibilities. It is well-known that the best way to raise children is to befriend them, spend time getting to know the kids
better; hence
, parents
could provide more attention
in time
when it is needed. Add an article
a time
Consequently
, if the young are not received enough attention
, they would start to think differently, which leads to more false behaviours. Additionally
, the lack of government's policies
has also
led to the growth of teenagers' crimes
. When more rules are enacted to punish the wrong behaviours, the young would be
aware of those and think twice before they dare to do something illegal. Add a hyphen
would-be
For example
, currently, Vietnam's laws for the under 18 are just providing them lectures, grounding them home in a period depending on their wrongdoing. These are not hard enough to prevent those kids
from stealing, murdering, etc.
There are many solutions that could be suggested, but the most effective one is enacting more policies
to protect the harmed citizen and hardly punish the wrong one. As a result
of it, there would be more parents
worrying about their children's futures if the kids
get busted, therefore
, more attention
is provided. Not only the parents
but also
the kids
might carefully think before doing any illegal stuff and this
could help the rates of criminal decrease significantly.
In conclusion, rising rates of crimes
could come from various factors namely parents
, schools, and laws. I would suggest that the wrongdoing should be hardly punished by enacting more policies
, which could also
help protect the citizen more safely.Submitted by nguyenngocminhanh1102 on
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