Some people think that they can make as much noise as they want, while others think that the amount of noise people make should be strictly controlled. Discuss both views and include your own opinion and examples.

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It is often argued that
people
should be allowed to exercise their freedom to make
noise
as much as they want while others protest against
this
idea of uncontrolled noises in
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their
the
vicinity. In
this
essay, I will present
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arguments
argument
from both
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and give my own opinion regarding
noise
problems. Those in favour of
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society usually maintain that
eveyone
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everyone
should be given free
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on
noise
-making regardless of how or loud or how long it might get.
This
is because some
people
tend to express their inner feeling through screaming or in some
particulary
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particularly
particular
high-pitch music genres,
such
as rock or hip-hop.
This
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activity
would
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relieve
receive
some of the emotional tensions one might
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from their daily lives. If governments try to penalize
people
just because they simply triggered
noise
, they would not have any means to turn their internal feelings to and
this
constant suppression might lead to
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issues later.
On the other hand
, most
people
are not living alone in one's own space. Since
people
usually stay together in residential areas, hearing undesirable noises may pose some stress on
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neighbouring
apartment
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or flats. It is
considerd
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considered
inconsiderate to have a night-long party,
for instance
, without any regard
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the surrounding families,
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particularly
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the elderly and the young.
This
is why some countries,
such
as Singapore have laws not to make any noticeable
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activities after 10pm at night. In summary, it is my opinion that
people
are entitled to express
thier
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their
noise
as they wish, we should
also
keep into consideration what
this
activity could affect on the rest of the community.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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