These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

A currently larger amount of
families
migrate to other nations for work. Some folks think that
children
will get benefits with
this
move while another group of people say that it makes
children
's life much harder.
this
essay will discuss both sides of the view and provide my reasonable opinion in the end. Migration became much easy rather than before due to various reasons and many
families
moved from their native country to alien land for work because they want to make their
children
live much more success than they are. if they move
children
will get more knowledge
then
their native peer's group has and even
also
their
children
get separate from
families
and settle ourselves which is the biggest thing to do.
In addition
, other countries provider higher salaries compared to other developing countries.
For example
, Indian people are mostly moving to USA or Canada to settle for their
families
and
this
statement was made by the USA president. While talking about opponents believe they say that will make
children
's life much difficult like ,
first
they have to settle themselves after that even child needs to be in touch with the native
children
which is the biggest thing to do for any migrants.
Secondly
,
children
have to be more soft skills which are to have if any
children
transfer to big cities.
Thirdly
, they even will get bullied by their peer group. To exemplify, In ,China they always bully Indian guys by their colours and their cultures. To sum up, maybe there are more benefits if the family transfer to another country for work, but drawbacks are more than benefits. so as per my opinion family should remain where they are
instead
of moving to an unknown country where they ruin their
children
's life.
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