Nowadays more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Today, the number of individuals who prefer buying food
instead
of cooking is increasing. Saving a lot of time
and money are the two main benefits of purchasing food. However
, having fewer nutrient ingredients is the main setback.
On one hand, the number of employees in major cities is getting raised. So, due to heavy duties which have to be done, most of them do not have enough time
for cooking. As a result
, they would like to consume fast foods
. For example
, in 2010, almost 67 per cent of New Yorkers were eating junk foods
rather than traditional foods
. Also
, fast foods
are affordable for individuals who do not have enough budget to buy fresh ingredients. because most of these types of foods
are not too costly for regular people
especially the pauper ones. For instance
, in 2019, people
with small wages reported they would prefer the hamburger instead
of steak because of its price.
On the other hand
, People
's health level is one of the most important issues of today. Although
ready foods
are fast and cheap enough to not be worried about our time
and money, they would bring a lot of chronic diseases for people
. Most of these ingredients not only do not have beneficial minerals but also
could be the main cause of obesity which would bring an unhealthy situation for individuals. For example
, the main reason for strokes in the age of 30 to 40 is consuming junk foods
that are produced in harmful oils.
In conclusion, the pattern of people
's diets has been changed and most of them prefer ready foods
which could create a situation to not spend their time
and money on healthy foods
. However
, this
situation would bring obesity or stroke for them.Submitted by ramtin.n1374 on
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