Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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usually look upon celebrities as ‘divine creatures’, individuals with special benefits/attributes, while in reality what they truly are is normal

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with talents that have made them famous. Being a celebrity, like any other job, may bring both benefits as well as problems. Correctly balancing the two faces of the coin actually relies on the celebrity’s ability to do so. When asked if they would like to become a celebrity, most

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would answer positively. The condition of fame and popularity is often sought after, especially because of the privileges that

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a position grants. Being famous, not only means that you are known and sometimes admired by a great majority of the population

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means you get to know a lot of

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, earn a good salary, and attend the most requested events.

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it may seem as if celebrities live the ‘perfect

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, the reality is very different from what it may appear. Popularity in fact has many negative sides that are often ignored because of its positive ones. Celebrities struggle with privacy and often aspects of their personal life are open to the public. Especially for those who are very famous, their lives are continuously at risk and they are obliged to be surrounded by personal security. Secrets don’t

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type of life and individuals have to accept being under the spotlight for most of their days. According to my opinion,

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condition may seem appealing, fast judgements may push

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towards the wrong opinion. Being a celebrity is not easy and requires many sacrifices that most of us wouldn’t be willing to make.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Public scrutiny
Intrusive
Endorsements
Sponsorships
Financial security
High-profile collaborations
Social influence
Philanthropic efforts
Trust issues
Mental health challenges
Substance abuse
Pressures of celebrity
Expectations
Disconnect from reality
Normalcy

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Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Students should pay their full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every yong person how to be a good parent Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent

the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.

Countries with long working days are more successful economically, but there are some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern professional women confront a difficulty that men don’t generally face: the struggle to balance the pressures of work and home. In your opinion, how can this difficulty best be ? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own knowledge or experiences.