The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries . Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

Nowadays, in many countries, there is an upward trend among the crimes committed by adolescents.
This
happens because of lacking knowledge and misunderstanding thinking.
However
, it can be solved by the cooperation of families and society.
First
of all,
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teenagers do not aware of the hazardous effects of their wrongdoings. They do whatever they think
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is challenging without noticing the outcomes. Some of them even commit a
crime
in order to receive
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admission from
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others. To illustrate, before being admitted to be one of the gangsters, they have to break some law
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such
as driving a car over the speed limit for proving that they have enough courage.
As a result
, it is a significant augment in the
youngsters
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crime
's number.
This
will lead to
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terrible situation in the future.
Moreover
, some children have an inappropriate mindset. They start to misbehave in order to seek
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attention from their parents. They think that the more they do wrongs, the more attention they receive.
On the other hand
,
this
problem can be solved by giving the young appropriate knowledge. Both schools and families have to take full responsibility for teaching them to consider
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their actions. They have to think twice before deciding to do
For example
, they need to know what are the advantages and disadvantages of skipping classes.
In addition
,
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law enforcement should be more effective in order to prevent them from doing wrong things. The government have to take serious action among those who commit a
crime
such
as increasing the punishment. To summarize, the
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of
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crime
rate resulting from an unawareness of the youngsters together with an inappropriate mindset can be solved by teaching and using the law.
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