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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. With might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed??

It is undeniable that most
people
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 are trying to do their own
business
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instead
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 of working for a company or other organization.
This
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 essay will explain the cause of why
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 are choosing to be self-employed and the drawbacks of working for themselves.
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 with, jobs dissatisfaction and giving a lot of
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 for
work
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 are encouraging
people
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 to be freelancers.
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,
people
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 have to
work
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 overtime in order to get good performance or to get a promotion if they
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 under a company.
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 resulted and their
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 being occupied with their works and unable to get private
time
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 when they need to
work
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 at the weekend.
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,
people
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 need to
work
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 under stress in order to meet deadlines which make them unhappy or dissatisfied with
work
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.
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, most
people
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 try to reassign from their organization because they feel unhappy or dissatisfied at
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. There are some drawbacks of owning of
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although
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 it may earn more money than working under a company.
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, the most common disadvantages are that owners can face failures when they start their
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. It cannot be monthly calculated the incomes like getting the salary.
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, an online seller’s income depends on how many persons purchased and it will be low if only a few
people
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 purchase.
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, if the
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 is successful and big, it will need a lot of employers and to manage them.
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 can make problems if there are not enough employers or many employers resign immediately. To sum up, it is clear that nowadays
people
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 are more trying to be freelancers than working as employees in the organization because of jobs dissatisfaction or
time
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 need to spend for
work
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.
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, the disadvantages
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 as facing
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 failures or lack of employees are resulted from being self-employed.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employed
  • company
  • organization
  • freedom
  • independence
  • income potential
  • flexibility
  • working hours
  • working location
  • passions
  • interests
  • decision-making
  • business practices
  • disadvantages
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