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Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many schools require young students to learn foreign languages. Some people believe that teachers should not force them to do so, while
this
 essay disagrees that
children
 should not learn a non-local
language
. The reasons are two-fold. The main reason is that learning new languages can allow students to find better jobs in the future. If people start learning a foreign
language
 when they are young, they can speak more fluently and have better writing skills. Many companies prefer multilingual candidates as they can communicate with overseas customers and partners,
for instance
, many employers prefer employing staff that can speak and write English.
As a result
, they will be more competitive in the job market and they will get more employment opportunities with better monetary returns when they grow up. Another reason is that it can allow
children
 to make friends from other places. When they learn
other
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another language
other languages
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language
 since they are young, they can communicate with foreigners easier as they can understand clearly what they are saying. If they have not
learn
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 their
second
language
 when they are young, the
language
 barrier could be a significant problem and it is more difficult to make deeper friendships when they have a limited vocabulary. During the study of that
language
, students can
also
 learn cultures from different countries and it is easier for
children
 to make friends from other places. To conclude, studying a
second
language
 is beneficial to
children
 as they can have better opportunities for jobs in the future and make more friends.
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