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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic word. Others believe that some information is to important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both view and give your own opinion?

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A wide range of
people
 believes that obtaining
information
 from different majors should be accessible to everyone, while others explain that
this
 plan has detrimental effects on society. I assume in order to save our community from adverse consequences; on no account should
information
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 in those fields be publicized. On the one hand, some
people
 justifiably argue that prior to informing
people
 with regard to science or other majors, all data should be analyzed.
This
 is due to the fact that many
people
 who are not well-educated misinterpret
this
 data.
For instance
,
people
 who are interested in medical science find it
easily
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 to make diagnose
about
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diseases.
Therefore
, they should struggle with new terms which harm their lives.
This
 situation is compounded by the fact that those
people
 opt to entry to new fields without any considerations.
On the other hand
, a group of individuals claim that by sharing
information
 with
people
, they become more knowledgeable and, in turn, become more efficient citizens. They insist that
this
 strategy plays a vital role in helping citizens to have a great insight into different subjects.
However
, I do not find
this
 argument convincing as many sinners may use
this
information
 to damage communities. For that reason, it is crucial to establish some laws to act as
deterrent
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 to
accessibility
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the accessibility
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 of
information
. In my opinion,
people
 should be divided into two groups: academic and ordinary. Academic
people
 merely access
to
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some
information
. In conclusion, even though, sharing
information
 has some merits for
people
 and opens a door to new ideas, making
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the wrong
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decision
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 and using data in an unappropriated way are two
reason
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 for confiding accessibility.
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