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You are shifting out of your accommodation. You think your current place of residence is suitable for your English speaking colleague who is arriving next month. Write a letter to your colleague. Explain why you are shifting out Describe your accommodation Explain why it is suitable for your friend

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Dear Jack, I hope you and your family are doing well. I want to inform you about my transfer from Pune to Bangalore and my apartment will be available for rent from
next
 month. As I already told you that my project work in Pune has been completed and my organisation wants me to join Bangalore Team for recent hybris development. I need to report to the Bangalore office by the end of
this
 month. Currently, I am living in a spacious 2 room flat with a mid-size kitchen.
This
 condo
also
 has 2 bathrooms, a large dining hall and a storeroom.
Furthermore
,
this
 residence is located on the 3rd floor of the building and it is situated at the prime location of Wakad, where you will have access to all the daily need items. I remember you told me about the course that you are going to pursue in Pune
next
 month, and you were searching for an apartment for you and your family. Well, my apartment can be the place that you were looking for. It has 2 large rooms and a spacious dining area where kids can play.
Also
, the balconies are large enough where your parents can sit and relax.
Also
, the rent that you were considering is very much affordable. I hope you will like my idea of offering my accommodation to you. Look for your positive revert. Best wishes, Mike
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