Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar,which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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The

health regulations have always been

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controversial

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. It is often argued that due to the fact that market products carry

sugar

in ample amount and

consequently

they are

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believed

as the main reason of health diseases, it is better to be sold at staggering costs in order to discourage the consumers from buying which eventually leads to less

sugar

consumption.

This

essay will discuss why I partly agree with

this

notion. To commence, along with

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lifestyle and lack of physical

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activities

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,using a huge amount of

sugar

in a daily diet might exacerbate the health conditions and result in

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illnesses

such

as Diabet and

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attack. As

sugar

plays a key role in everyday servings including pasta and bread, it tends to be

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unattainable to eliminate it from our food stock.

Therefore

, it could be reasonable to be taxed to restrain buyers from purchasing.

For instance

, If a bar of chocolate costs the same as a box of cheese, shoppers may

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over the former as milk is a more nutrient meal .

As a result

,

this

policy may have cumulative benefits in a long run.

On the other

hand

, there is no shadow of a doubt that in

this

modern era , citizens are reluctant to be obliged to do an activity even though it brings

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numerous

benefits.

Furthermore

, the

governnment

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government

would not be liable to restrict the buyers' food options.

In other words

,

this

regulation might be the same as putting human

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will power under question which is neither socially acceptable nor recommended.

additionally

, it is believed that habitats enforcing to make decisions might not be able to live the life fully.

This

is evidenced by northern Korean's way of living.it has shown that the minority of one-thirds is content with the mandatory perks being granted by the government.

Thus

, people have a right to decide for their own life regardless of the consequences. To sum up, despite the fact that several heart problems might spring from

sugar

consumption relating to market commodities , I reaffirmed my position that I partially agree with surging their prices as it has the advantage of protecting people from sicknesses on the one

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hand

, while , it could be considered utterly absurd to interfere people's eating habit and command them,

on the other

hand

.