An increasing number of children have become hooked on fat food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children. What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?

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formula of diet and

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unhealthy

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dietary

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the increase of obesity among

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generation. There are several problems

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essay followed by reasons and examples, as well as steps to prevent the issues. One of the problems of the negative

foodstyle

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food style

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is because of the trend in kids.

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age friendship can play important role in

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children

behavior

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and lifestyle

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the trend

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trend

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in

school

or they simply follow their friends

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in terms of

food

.

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, another problem that

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to be considered is most of them think that fat

food

and aerated water are more delicious than healthy

food

, which

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the

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problem of any kind of

ages

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.

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, kids tend to eat healthy

food

only if their family is watching and not because of their awareness to eat healthy

food

.

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, nutritious

food

is still

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issue to be applied

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young

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generation. A possible solution to

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problem

is educate

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is to educate

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little girls and boys in

school

by presenting a fun learning in "how to eat health and nutritious

food

" to illustrate take,

for

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conduct lunch together in

school

while the teachers

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lessons about what kind of

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healthy

meal should be.

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, teachers can give a standard of the meal they should bring in order to build a

habit

of

eat

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nutritious

food

. Another sensible approach is that parents should build up

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dietary

habit

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because house and family

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the main part of kids growth.

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habit

may be implied by

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home-cooking together each day or

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party in

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day.

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younger to learn how to cook is one of the best

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to keep them away from bad foodstyle. To sum up, children may

hooked

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on

fat

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fast

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food

and aerated drinks due to

trend

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in

school

or the taste of the fast meal, but it can

be mitigate

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by education in

school

and parents guidance in

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so that, they can be aware of the importance of

keep

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the healthy lifestyle.