An increasing number of children have become hooked on fat food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children. What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?
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formula of diet and Add an article
The bad
unhealty
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unhealthy
dieatry
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dietary
habit
cause
the increase of obesity among Change the verb form
causes
young
generation. There are several problems Add an article
the young
may
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that may
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effect
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affect
this
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be discuss
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essay followed by reasons and examples, as well as steps to prevent the issues.
One of the problems of the negative foodstyle
is because of the trend in kids. Correct your spelling
food style
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at
this
age friendship can play important role in Correct your spelling
affecting
effecting
children Correct your spelling
affecting
behavior
and lifestyle Change the spelling
behaviour
such
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the trend
trend
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trends
school
or they simply follow their friends habit
in terms of food
. Moreover
, another problem that need
to be considered is most of them think that fat Change the verb form
needs
food
and aerated water are more delicious than healthy food
, which also
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For example
, kids tend to eat healthy food
only if their family is watching and not because of their awareness to eat healthy food
. Hence
, nutritious food
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a hard
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to
young
generation.
A possible solution to Correct article usage
the young
this
problem is educate
little girls and boys in Change the verb form
is to educate
school
by presenting a fun learning in "how to eat health and nutritious food
" to illustrate take, for
example
conduct lunch together in Add the comma(s)
,example
school
while the teachers gives
lessons about what kind of Change the verb form
give
healty
meal should be. Correct your spelling
healthy
In addition
, teachers can give a standard of the meal they should bring in order to build a habit
of eat
nutritious Change the verb form
eating
food
. Another sensible approach is that parents should build up positive
dietary Add an article
the positive
habit
from house
because house and family Add an article
the house
is always be
the main part of kids growth. Change the verb form
is always
Furthermore
, this
habit
may be implied by do
home-cooking together each day or Change the verb form
doing
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having barbekyu
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the backyard
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on
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the big
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younger to learn how to cook is one of the best Wrong verb form
Inviting
way
to keep them away from bad foodstyle.
To sum up, children may Change to a plural noun
ways
hooked
on Change the verb form
be hooked
hook
fat
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fast
food
and aerated drinks due to trend
in Fix the agreement mistake
trends
school
or the taste of the fast meal, but it can be mitigate
by education in Change the verb form
be mitigated
school
and parents guidance in house
so that, they can be aware of the importance of Add an article
the house
keep
the healthy lifestyle.Change the verb form
keeping
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