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In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

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It is true that fast
food
 has become more accessible than ever in most parts of the world. In my mind, drawbacks brought about by
this
 phenomenon are negligible when compared to its benefits. To start, some issues stemming from fast
food
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 readily available cannot be overlooked. The primary concern over fast
food
 is its excessive consumption by individuals and its resulting detrimental effect on their health. Studies have confirmed that over-consumption of so-called junk
food
 can be closely linked to obesity and cardiovascular conditions.
Furthermore
, as more and more
people
 consume fast
food
, they are likely to spend less
time
 eating homemade
food
.
This
 appears to reduce the amount of
time
people
 spend together socializing. Indeed, increased demand for fast
food
 underlies the fact that
people
 today tend to lead fast-paced lives where they allocate substantially less
time
 to family and friends than they did before.
However
, I would argue that the ever-increasing availability of fast
food
 has made our lives better. Were not it for fast
food
,
people
 could not achieve the kind of productivity in the workplace they have now. While in the past lunch breaks lasted 1 to 2 hours, it is today possible to cut it down to a maximum of 30 minutes.
Time
 saved in the process can be used to accomplish more tasks than one normally would.
In addition
 to greater efficiency at work, there is
also
 the fact that fast
food
 tastes better as opposed to traditional
food
. A majority of
people
, when asked, would much rather eat fast
food
 than other forms of
food
.
Finally
, another school of thought argues that fast
food
 is not unhealthy as long as it is consumed in moderation. Even some athletes admit to having burgers and fries as their main source of carbohydrates and protein. In conclusion,
although
 fast
food
 is thought to be responsible for health issues and a decline in social bonding, I am of the opinion that the advantages coming from the wide availability of fast
food
 are more significant.
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