People buy a product if it fulfill their needs, there is no need for advertisement to what extent do you agree or disagree with it ?

We are living in the modern era,
advertisement
is the most vital role in every human life. the entire world busy into fulfilling own needs.
advertisement
to get the latest update about what new
product
launch in the market. I totally disagree with
this
statement. I would like to explain it at length in the paragraph to come.
To begin
with, promotion is a significant role in awareness about new upgrade products in the market. nowadays, there is every
person
connected with social
site
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and media. when a commercial
company
launch a new
product
then
an individual
tohave
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go through knowledge about the
product
. we are going aware of variety and brand.
for example
, Ambani is the richest
person
in India. he becomes a brand ambassador. Ambani year launch new
product
. he is the owner of Reliance
company
and jio
company
. majority of individuals always buy a home grocery from Reliance mall. when he had a promotion about jio
sim
.
then
he did free data and free balance in
sim
.
Hence
, every massive were bought
sim
whereas, they won't need.
however
, how do they know about jio
sim
? only go through advertisements.
Furthermore
, with
this
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the income of many people is associated. as well as, a huge amount of benefits for television, manufacturing companies,
seller
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sellers

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and
buyer
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buyers

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. people always have curiosity for use new
product
rather than, use the old
product
.
for example
, when whichever,
company
announcement about new things
then
firstly
they are playing
mind
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game with the customer. we explain that when
company
start new
product
firstly
they sell
product
cheapest
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price after that, customer
buy
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a new
product
and they take things. every
person
has knowledge about the good and bad
product
go through the
advertisement
. conclusion, every
person
need to be aware of the
product
Hance,
advertisement
is the best way to fulfil every
person
needs. awareness is not only the best way to gain knowledge but
also
help change lifestyle.
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