Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter •explain the reasons for the noise •apologise •describe what action you will take

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Dear Mr. Smith, Hope you are doing well. I read your letter and came to know that you felt inconvenienced by the noise pollution, I would like to ask for an apology from your side and

also

want to give you the reason behind

this

noise. I want to tell you that in my house my cupboard was damaged as it was too old.

Thus

, I have to repair it.

Moreover

,I told

this

situation to my carpenter and he told me that

this

would take 4-5 hours but when he came to my home he showed me another fault in my cupboards. Resultantly,

this

repair work was held for 2 days. I did not know that you had difficulty with that.

Therefore

, I am wholeheartedly sorry for

this

disturbance from my side. I will assure you that in the future I will put a noise controller device on my main door. I hope you understand

this

situation and forgive me. I wanted to invite you to my home for dinner next Saturday. Hope you will accept my invitation and come to my home. Yours sincerely, Sophia Brown.

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coherence cohesion

Ensure paragraphs are structured around a single main idea each, to improve clarity.

task achievement

Maintain a consistent and polite tone throughout the letter for a more suitable writing tone.

task achievement

The letter includes a clear reason for the noise, an apology, and a proposed action.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a logical beginning, middle, and end.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

sincere apologies
inconvenience
disturbance
earnestly
unfortunately
recently
necessary repairs
soundproofing
appropriate hours
notify
regrettable
considerate
peace and quiet
appreciate your understanding
steps to mitigate

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