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the average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #health #future
The
health
 issue has been an important topic for generations. Many
people
 argue that the standard of our
health
 seems to be lower in the future. I do not agree with
this
 statement.
This
 essay will tell the reasons to support my opinion.
First
 of all, everyone knows
health
 is one of the most important parts of our lives and they try to keep in a good
health
 in many ways.
For instance
,
people
 are getting more interests in nutritious food. A lot of produces brands advertise their high-quality products and emphasize organic food. Even though the costs are more expensive than non-organic products,
people
 are willing to buy them.
In addition
, working out for better
health
 is more done compared to the past. According to medical research, the number of citizens who exercise after work has been increasing 30% for the
last
 5 years. In the case of my colleagues, many of them go to the gym or do other physical activities
such
 as yoga, martial arts, or running every day after work.
On the other hand
, some
people
 still eat junk food or stay in bed
instead
 of burning calories. To conclude, with the reasons that I mentioned above, I strongly think that more and more
people
 tend to pay attention to their well-being and
this
 flow makes the average
people
's
health
 standard higher in the future than now.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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