Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

A majority of people believe that

children

should not be free to make their own choices in that they become more ego-centric. While others think, it is

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reasonable strategy to ask

children

to interfere in matters which influence them. I believe in order to benefit from better community

children

should pay much more attention to important situations and give their own opinion. Some people justifiably argue that once

children

make their own

decisions

with regard to their vital matters, they are more likely to become independent.

Therefore

, they have more chance to deal with some difficulties in future in that

this

quality improve critical thinking in

children

. In Germany,

for instance

, many organizations have been established some courses to boost

children

’s abilities in

this

field and

also

, encourage

children

to communicate with their peers about their interests and desires to find their

goals

.

Nevertheless

, other

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claim that

children

should be confined to

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their own

decisions

about routine matters. They insist that

this

plan contributes to some problems in

society

in that

children

spend long hours persuading their

goals

as opposed to

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about

society

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values.

However

, I do not find

this

argument convincing enough as

children

should be aware

about

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the consequences of their own

decisions

and how their

goals

affect

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.

As a result

, they get used to finding different norms in

society

and, in turn, have profound insight into themselves and their country. I n conclusion, I believe that

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this

view is a

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sword, it preserves countries from possible adverse consequences of detrimental

decisions

of their citizens,

however

, it boost citizens to think more clearly about their role in

society

and take

responsibilities

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for their aims and

goals

.