Some people say smoking should be banned on public places. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

In the
last
20 years, technology had a magnificent effect on our daily communications. It is not far-fetched that
this
new trend changed our social life forever. It is clear that most people use advanced programmes
such
as emails and social networks applications to talk to each other. Writing letters and even speaking on the phone, eventually, are going to get obsolete. The new generation believe, we have to adapt ourselves to new advanced technology and appreciate
this
opportunity to improve our ways of speaking.
However
, there are a few drawbacks to
this
genuinely new phenomenon.
First
, it affects our children’s literacy of grammars because, nowadays by artificial intelligence in the vast majority of apps, they have an auto-correct option so spontaneously, detects our grammar and dictation problems
thus
, rewrites the correct one for us.
Secondly
, the young generation improvises to make new words and use them in their regular conversation.
For instance
, LOL means laughing out loud, they even use these abstracted words in their speaking
in addition
,in new researches illustrate, lots of students have problems with the correct pronunciation. Some of them are not capable to spell their name.
Nevertheless
, we should provide special facilities in the mainstream education system to make sure they will learn about the literature and prepare them for their future work field. In conclusion, we can’t ignore the fact, we can’t prevent the effect of technology on our lives,
although
, we can control the process to make sure it won’t be a hazard to our society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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