You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Apologize for your absence and explain the reasoning Explain why you had to be at the other event Explain what you will do to catch up Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr. Brannagan

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Dear Mr Brannagan, I am writing to apologize for my absence from the charity event our company held on Sunday to fundraise money for orphan children. In fact, my sister had already previously scheduled her marriage to the same night as the event as I could not miss

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special occasion for our family. The wedding was planned to start at 6pm, one hour before the company's event.

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, despite the fact I am the bride's sister, I was

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invited to be one of her bridesmaids.

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, I could not even arrive later at the marriage.

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, I would like to reach my co-worker's efforts by giving a solo contribution to raise money to help those orphans children.

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, I have been wondering if I could sell some treats in our enterprise to raise more cash for them, at least for a week. Would you authorize it? I look forward to contributing to

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amazing initiative from our workplace. I would very much appreciate your help. Best regards, Anna Fraga

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

171 words

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