The intrnet has brought sea change in the way inforamtion is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. what are the most serious problems linked to the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

As technology develops in speed, the
internet
becomes the most important thing in our daily
life
. We are almost always online for many reasons
such
as for our education, business or maybe for more personal development and fun. As it benefits in many ways in our
life
, there may be
also
some negative impact on us. I want to describe some problems with the
internet
that we are dealing with.
First
of all, honestly, the
internet
is very addictive and we spend a lot of
time
on
this
. We can
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a variety of things online
such
as clothing, cosmetics, music and any websites that we want. So our study hours becomes less and less and lose interest in studying.
This
is the greatest impact on the young.
For example
, I
also
spend a lot of
time
scrolling Instagram and Pinterest over the study hours. At
first
, I click google for collecting data for my assignment but a minute later I have already been on some cosmetics websites with no intention. And the
internet
becomes more and more a part of my
life
and
this
consumes a lot of my precious
time
.
In addition
, most adults lose their interest and just mind their online games. They do not want to try for their future anymore and become less productive day by day. So their daily
life
is simple, sleeping, eating and spending
time
in front of the screen. When
this
period longer, they feel dull and depressed and they start feeling they are useless. They don't get enough with their
life
and
this
leads them to be introverts and bad at socialization with people. Another reason is the rays that radiate from the screen that can cause damage to our vision. How to solve
this
problem? I would like to advise searching for some applications that will remind you to stop using for today and limit the
time
that you can use the
internet
. You
also
need to prepare some schedules for the works that you might need to do today. You can
also
browse some websites that will manage your timetable. I think that would be the most suitable solution for the problems with the
internet
. In conclusion, there may be both positive and negative impacts dealing with the
internet
, we should use them effectively for our improvement. We should spend only a few minutes on our fun. So setting the
time
properly and using the apps that notify us for our screen-
time
cut our addiction to the
internet
.
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