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Some people believe that technology is now an invaluable study tool for young people. Others, however, believe that it is harmful for the studying process. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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We are living in years when almost everyone is studying online, because of the pandemic. Some
people
 think that online classes are
very
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 progressive and effective way of studying, but
on the other
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 there are another group of
people
 who believe that the
students
 can’t be educated enough good throw a monitor.
Students
 save a lot of
time
,
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 when they are learning from their homes.
Usually
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 they need to travel
with
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 public transport for a very long
time
 and because of that they always have problems managing their
time
. Sometimes when the
students
 have a lot of homework, but they have to leave, because they are going to be late for school, they frequently finish their homework during the
traveling
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. But now, when
traveling
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 is not necessary, they have much more
time
 for everything. They can plan their day better and structure their commitments.
However
, not all
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people
 think that online education is a good idea.
For example
, all of my
teachers
 say that they prefer all of us to attend school. They have told us that they can’t be sure what we are doing during lessons and
this
 is one of the reasons why
teachers
 want to go back
in
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 class to give us tests.
Moreover
, all
teachers
 are
on
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 the opinion that if no one
control
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 us, we will do something enormously bad. Sometimes the
students
 were even accused
for
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 the situation of
this
 online studying, which is ridiculous. None of us
have
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 wanted
this
, so they can blame anyone for that. Online education is not the perfect solution neither for
students
, nor for the
teachers
, but in
this
 situation, I think it’s better
people
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 to think more about their health than for the negative sites of distance learning. The most important thing, which everyone needs to understand, is that if one person wants to know,
then
 nothing can stop him. Boryana Raycheva
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