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In some countries, students pay their college or university fees, while In some others, the government pay for them. Do you think the advantages that government pays the mony outweigh the disadvantages?

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The importance of university fees are paying either
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 or the
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 should provide free
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 for
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 which was always debatable has now become more controversial with some
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 having
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 rule, while other
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 where student pay their own fees. In my opinion. Not only there are myriad merits but
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 there are a few demerits of
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 trend. There are myriad reasons why
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 provide free
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 for
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 but the
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 and foremost one is that
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 which knows that
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 is the main factor for developing life and educated
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 helps to reach better nations
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 why higher
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 is free by
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 in some nations.
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, Germany has free
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 at the university level for both citizens and international students
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 the main reason, Germany is the most invited country among other
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.
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, there are some other merits of
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 trend.
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, every student has the right to get higher
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 but some students have not had enough finance for
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 study
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 why the
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 can help those students student perceive their higher study.
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 is an important advantage because the
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 educated index is higher than those
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 that are not proving free
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.
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, the
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 has not one responsibility there are other sectors
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 as health, transportation and others.
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 why those sectors should be balanced by the
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. The
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 sector takes an important part in GDP. The main reason why some
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 does not provide free
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. To conclude, according to the argument, one can reach the conclusion that there are many advantages of
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 trend but we can not ignore the drawbacks of free
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