Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some that the crucial
school
curriculum is
History
while others thought that learning subjects like
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Science
and
Technology
are more helpful for the future in
modern
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the modern
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world
. In my opinion, studying Science and
Technology
have
more
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positive impact on today lifestyle even though knowing historical events is good for learning to improve from
past
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the past
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mistake and inspire
the
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famous invention. On the one hand,
children
can learn how to avoid the making same mistakes from the past by learning
History
.
In other words
, by teaching the story of
World
War I & II,
children
can learn how to live harmoniously within different races and how to avoid happening the same things over and over again.
For instance
, people
noesday
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today
are living peacefully in
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world
thanks to having knowledge of the past.
Moreover
, adding
History
as the
school
coursework is an advantage because
children
can inspire by
the
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past victory and motivate
them
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to become one themselves.
For example
, students can probably find their interest in
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of new
equiptments
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equipment
from the tale of
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invention. On the
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contrary
, teaching Science in
school
is
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essential because the scientists are involved in
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major role to save the environment and mankind.
For instance
,
the
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vaccines and drugs are in demand urgently during
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a covid
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outbreak in order to save
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life
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and to resume
normal
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lifestyle, as the result, the nature of
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are experimented
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tested to get the vaccine by scientists.
Finally
,
children
should learn
Technology
in
school
in order to adapt
with
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the latest technologies of the
world
trends. As the
world
becomes full of technological devices, students should familiar with them so that they don't have any problem using them. To conclude, I mostly agreed that course like science and
technology
are more
importance
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than
history
since the
world
need
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more scientists to maintain the ecosystem and well being of human.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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