Do you often have dreams? Do you usually remember your dreams

Everyone in
this
life
has a
dream
to follow, and they want to achieve their goal the thought makes us happy and lets us keep going in
this
growth even if we stumble, the
dream
helps us rise
consequently
I couldn’t imagine living my
life
without a
dream
or putting a plan to achieve what I want in
this
world. The
dream
is changed depending on our circle
life
when we grow up it is various from when we are young or when we teenagers or an adult. My
dream
is to become a doctor‏ and the specialization is
heart
surgery it is wonderful to think about how you can help other people and give them another chance to live and
heart
disease have more Its causes are a plethora of, could be infection, parasites,
heart
attack, etc The
heart
is the basis for the
life
of
this
body. Knowing everything about it changes your thinking. How can a piece the size of the palm how the body gets work Now the
dream
is changed I couldn’t achieve
this
one in my
life
owing to the fact that my grade at my school is less than what the universities required to study
this
major buy I can’t stop thinking about
this
I read I read to expand my knowing repertoire on
this
topic. ‏ And my new
dream
right now is merely to get a high score in the IELTS exam.
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