Some people believe educational qualifications always bring success. Others think educational qualifications do not necessarily bring success. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

In recent years, whether educational qualifications could always bring

success

is debatable. In

this

essay, I will discuss it and give my own opinion. An obvious argument in its

favor

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is that it is much easier for a person with an outstanding educational background to land a good job and make money, which is an important

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to measure

success

and failure.

That is

because it is the most convenient and powerful method to illustrate one’s ability in a field to employers when a graduate just

walk

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into

workplace

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without any associated experience.

By contrast

, another one who has no diploma is more likely to do a

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job for a small income, even though he is equipped with intelligence, decisiveness and diligence. That means proving his capability is a long way.

However

, a good start is not equal to an excellent end and even the opposite is not uncommon. Generally, a bachelor or master degree only represents

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IQ while a genuinely successful man is armed with a wide variety of great qualities: communication, cooperation and so on

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.

Thus

if a graduate could not communicate effectively and pleasantly or cooperate well with his colleagues, he will gradually be marginalized and do not have the opportunity to involve in crucial schemes.

Then

how can he achieve

success

? In conclusion, I argue that good education can only help one gain a better beginning much more easily compared with those who do not.

However

, life is a long journey, where getting

success

is not easy and

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one

also

need

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to know how to keep learning, and how to communicate and cooperate with others positively.