You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue into late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter: explain what will be happening offer your apologies in advance invite her to join the celebration Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr / Ms _________ You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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Dear Mr. Sunil,
My name is Raman, and I am living next to your house. I am writing
this
letter to inform you about a party
that I am going to organize this
Saturday.
Last
week, I completed my degree in nursing. So, to celebrate my happiness, I am throwing an outdoor barbecue party
for my friends and relatives. Moreover
, guests would be around 50 or more.
To make my celebration memorable, we will dance to music. The party
will start at 6pm till midnight.
I really apologize in advance because the sound may create noise and invited people will park their cars in front of your home.
I am sending you an invitation card to join my celebration and come to give me blessings for the success. It would be great,
if you attend with your family members.
Waiting for a prompt response from your side regarding Remove the comma
apply
this
request. See you in the party
.
Yours lovingly,
RamanSubmitted by harmandeep51075 on
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coherence cohesion
You could improve coherence by ensuring each paragraph flows naturally into the next.
coherence cohesion
Try to link ideas more explicitly within paragraphs for better cohesion.
task achievement
You have included all parts of the task, such as explaining the event, apologizing, and inviting the neighbor.
task achievement
The letter has a polite and suitable tone for addressing a neighbor.
coherence cohesion
Greeting and closing of the letter are correctly formatted.
coherence cohesion
Logical structure is maintained with a clear flow from explanation to apology to invitation.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph maintains a single idea, making it easy to follow.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.
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