Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and What measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Global warming is one of the most acute
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that the world is coming up against nowadays .
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this
alarming
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.In the following paragraphs,I'll go through the reasons for it and what may be done to prevent it There are many causes ,for a number of reasons, The greenhouse effect is a phenomenon where gases
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as carbon dioxide trap heat from the sun which result in the global temperature
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upon
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the optimal level .Factories and vehicles produce emissions of carbon gases and fumes which are
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the zone layer surrounding the earth .
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many developing countries are becoming
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and the number of cars on our streets is growing. So they could impose "
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"on drivers and airline companies so that we should take public transport rather than driving.The
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Government
Governments
should invest in renewable energy from solar ,wind or water power for individuals. Today the government is creating green spaces around the world to combat air pollution, many trees are being planted and people are being asked to pay more attention to cleanliness. In
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,global warming is one of the
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problem
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that humans are facing if appropriate
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for the environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global issue
  • severity
  • urgency
  • greenhouse effect
  • human-induced
  • deforestation
  • fossil fuel combustion
  • industrial pollution
  • environmental regulations
  • emission standards
  • renewable energy sources
  • green technologies
  • international cooperation
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • energy consumption
  • public transportation
  • recycling
  • eco-friendly
  • extreme weather conditions
  • biodiversity
  • economic stability
  • collective responsibility
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