in the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

Every day scientists are trying more and more to
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authorize
various important processes in our
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, and one of them is applying
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into
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industry. Yet will
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changes lead to good consequences or not ?
Firstly
,
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in cars will reduce
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accidents
caused by human errors. Every year, many cases in a road occur
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of people falling
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asleep
while driving.
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vehicles have a significant benefit of not
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if drivers will use
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people
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to drive physically. For
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individuals, having
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with
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to use taxi services
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to buy some products in
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for example
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hand, people
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from
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driver
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, so it might lead to bad consequences
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like somebody can know where you are, when do you left home and so on. In conclusion, I consider that self-driving systems in vehicles it's like
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for automizing, for that will change our world
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technological sight, because we live in 21 century,
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of modern technology.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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