Every year several languages die out. Some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is true that every year several
languages
disappear, and some believe that it is good for having better communication, while, I completely disagree and I think it is important to have diversity in
languages
.
First
of all , it is important to remember every language represent a culture that can not explain with other accents.
For example
in Persian , women were the important members of society for a long time and people had had same behaviour with girls and boys. As we can see from our
languages
, in Persian girls and boys have the same pronouns in opposition to other accents, and because of cultural situations, it is impossible to replace it with other
languages
with the same specification.
Secondly
, if we imagine a world with one language and no one left with multiple
languages
, it is expected that communication becomes easier around the world, but
this
world has Persian with a lower IQ. In fact, many scholars are studying the past few years about the influence of learning other
languages
on having better
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and
also
having bigger brains than people who know merely their maternal
languages
. They have shown us that without diversity of
languages
our brain may evolve to become smaller and
then
human progression becomes slower than what we could imagine.
In addition
, some Russian researchers in 2012 showed us that, people with the ability to speak different
languages
probably have better psychological health. In conclusion, based on these facts, I believe that diversity of
languages
is very important.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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