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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There can be various reasons for a
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 to be extinct. Some people believe that it would be better if there are fewer
languages
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 in the world so people will live a better life. In my point of view, it is a tragedy if a
language
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 dies out.
Firstly
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, every
language
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 holds a piece of the past and culture as a medium.
For instance
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, Oroqen people’s
language
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 doesn’t have text, and they inherit their story and knowledge through stories from word-of-mouth. Their
language
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 is part of the memoir which contains a part of how human beings were developed in
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 an area. The loss of a
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 is the damage of resources that we can gain experience from.
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, fewer
languages
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 will not lead to an easier life.
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, let’s imagine a world with only one
language
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. Different accents in different regions will result in a different custom of
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 using which will
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 lead to several new
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. The obstacle of understanding a completely different accent will not be easier to overcome than understanding a new
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. The idea of using the same
language
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 globally has already been dreamed of but failed in the end. So, it’s impractical to attempt to achieve a single-
language
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 world. In conclusion, the dying of a
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 is a passing of cultural treasure and will not make our life easier.
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, saving these
languages
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 as we can is a serious task for us to save history. Both making them still alive and recording them to make a fossil are possible and practical efforts to save a
language
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.

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