Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although
some
people
believed that acquiring a new
language
is a must just in case of travelling or working overseas, others think that learning another
language
has many purposes and it does not limit to leisure and
job
opportunity
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in foreign countries. I certainly
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to
latter
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group.
In
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the one hand, due to the growth of globalization, there are a lot of multinational companies which acquire international employees. It means that nowadays there are more
job
opportunities all around the world.
Therefore
, many
workforce
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are
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tending
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to learn international languages
such
as
English
, Spanish and French.
Furthermore
, thanks to technological advances in
transportation
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industry, travelling is more
convenience
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rather than
the
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past
therefore
, more
people
have
tendency
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a tendency
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to travel abroad and
this
trend is increasing. Knowing another
language
especially international languages help
people
to discover many countries independently, without any need to tour leaders and travel agencies.
On the other hand
, there are a lot of benefits in acquiring a foreign
language
which
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it
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beyond
the
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leisure and
job
.
For instance
, many books, magazines, movies and researches are published in
English
or have
English
subtitles and
English
edition
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.
Therefore
, If you know
English
, you could benefit from them and there is no need to use translated ones. Even the most accurate translation might change the original meaning.
Moreover
, during the process of learning a foreign
language
people
immerse themselves in the culture .
For example
, they know about the peoples,
custom
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customs
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,
opinion
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opinions
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, literature and religion of that region.
As a result
, mutual understanding will increase between nations. In Conclusion,
although
for some learning a
language
is limited to
visit
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different countries and international
job
opportunity
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opportunities
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, for others it has
wide
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range of benefits which broaden their minds. I strongly believed that learning a foreign
language
goes far beyond
the
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travelling or employment. It is
an
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immersing in a new culture.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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